tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1446821577133109926.post2063155455042452848..comments2018-03-10T16:51:44.571+05:30Comments on My Musings: Merin Josehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10616672510921106146noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1446821577133109926.post-3433985956070654932008-12-12T19:44:00.000+05:302008-12-12T19:44:00.000+05:30Thanku nirenjan fr this encouraging comment....act...Thanku nirenjan fr this encouraging comment....actually this poem is a repetition in ma blog...this ws my first post in the blog n one f ma earlier poems...hwevr am sad abt the fact that i couldnt convey my ideas effectively thru this poem coz i ws trying to put across the beauty f setting sun...n the reader understood it as the rising sun...!!Merin Josehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10616672510921106146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1446821577133109926.post-36712065492697388992008-12-12T13:13:00.000+05:302008-12-12T13:13:00.000+05:30There could have been a better title given to the ...There could have been a better title given to the whole experience of visualizing and conceptualising the withering and Waning of God's beautiful creations with the 'highlighted' splendour of the rising Sun.As a reader i felt there z a logical flaw to the poem as a whole.<BR/>"Golden Eye of the vast blue" is too beautiful a usage.The last line turned out to be a cliche' from which many budding writes including myself is unable to escape from.Now as a person who likes reading Merin's poems,i would like to say that u can craft much better poems.unveil the potential....Nirenjan.A.Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169969964641644444noreply@blogger.com